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Tuesday 27 March 2018

my acrostic poem




This week our class has been learning about acrostic poems
This is my acrostic poem

2 comments:


  1. Malo le lei my name is Hesioni.
    I like Easter when everybody is happy.
    Next time, make sure the words are easy to see because one of the pictures is covering your writing.
    Where did you get your Easter pictures from?

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    1. Thank you Hesioni for the feedback i will surely make the words easy to see next time.
      Hesioni i have gotten the pictures from google search
      i like Easter to in a diffrent way tho

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